Describing Yourself
My name is Bill Tsai. I am a young man of medium size, not short and thin, with short black cut hair and a bit white skined. I've got a round face and small brown eyes. I don't wear a pair of glasses. I love wearing black or green sweatshirt and blue jeans. I am also wearing a pair of comfortable sneakers.
My character is not ambitious, artistic and competibive. I think that I'm a shy, honest and lazy person. Sometime, I didn't used my brains to got rid of trouble. Because I'm too lazy to use brains. My attitudes is very friendly if you never do anything stupid or break my heart. So I think we can make friend if you want to know me.

1 Comments:
a medium -->a young man of medium size
a short black cut hair-->delete 'a'
I'm got a round faced
-->I am round faced
-->I've got a round face
I am love wearing black or green sweatshirt and blue jeans.
-->I love ...
competibive-->spelling
Sometime, I didn't used my brains to got rid of trouble. Because I'm a peron who is too lazy to used brains.
-->combine these two sentences into one
-->... becuase ... too lazy to use ...
My attitudes is very friendly if you never do anything of stupid or break my heart. So I think we can make a friend if you want to know me.
-->My attitude is ... anything stupid
-->make friends
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