Wednesday, December 13, 2006

A Pobular Place to Vacation

Hua Shan is a great place to go for a family vacation because there are many things to do and see. First of all, there are lots of coffee shop to eat, drink and many kinds of products is made of coffee bean. There are many shops to choose from. You might enjoy coffee in the evening, someone like go to there in the daybreak to get a hot coffee and view the scense of sunrise. The view from the top of the mountain head is spectacular. By the way, there is beautiful mounts that are perfect for people who like mountaineering. The mountaineers will find lots of challenges. Hua Shan is one of the most popular vacation destinations in the Taiwan. Wish you like and visit it.

1 Comments:

At 7:52 AM , Blogger Yuhsiuwriting said...

Well done, don't forget to pay attention to the plural forms.


there is many things
-->there are...

there are lots of coffee shop to eat, drink and many kind of products is make of coffee bean.
-->shops...many kinds of...(which are) made of...


Many shop there are to choose from
-->There are many shops to choose from.



The view from the top of the mount head is spectacular.
-->hilltop (top of the mountain)

By the way, there is beautiful mounts that are perfect for people who like mountaineering.
-->there are...mountains


The mountaineer will find lots of challenges.
-->The mountaineers...

 

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