All music are not made relax before going to sleep
Most people need listening to music to relax their minds because it helps themselves before going to sleep every day. But What kinds of music can helps people to relax? According to the bulletin, we know that the classical or baroque music can helps people falling asleep.
For example, before going to sleep, you can listen to some music to comparison and contrast it. For instance, popular music and classical...etc. You will find out that the classical can help you falling asleep because it had cantus firmus to relax mind.
The popular music is not good bed-time music because most of popular songs have lyrics in them. It will bring about your attention to hear it. In fact, what kinds of music depend on yourself, maybe you just like to listen to some radio because the DJ will say something to everybody and his voice is softly in tone.
For instance, I like listening to light music before going to sleep because it is suitable for me. If you have a hard time falling asleep at night, you should try it. Maybe you will feel that any voice is too noisy. Remember to keep the voice not too loud." When you are used to it, it can help you to control your mind to sleep better.

1 Comments:
The topic of this essay is...? If you can make your topic clear, the whole strucure will be much clearer. If you want to compare two kinds of music, maybe you need to talk about more than just one point!
listening music -->listening to music
But What kinds of music can helps people to relax mind?
-->But what...can help... (delete mind)
you can listening some music to comparison and contrast it.
-->You can listen to...
睡覺前還要比較 真是太辛苦了
The popular music is not suitable to falling asleep by reason of it had words of a song.
-->is not good bed-time music because most of popular songs have lyrics in them.
It will bring about your attention to listening it.
-->check 'listen' 用法
In fact, what kinds of music is depend on yours, maybe you just like to listening some radio because the DJ will say something to everybody and his voice is softly in tone.
-->delete 'is'
-->depend on yourself
-->like to listen to ...
For instance, I like to listening light music before going to sleep because it is suitable for me.
-->I like listening to ...
If you have a hard time falling asleep at night, you should be to try it.
-->you should try it.
Maybe you will feel that there is some voice too noise.
-->any voice is too noisy
But rememter that "the voice do not too loud.
-->Remember to keep the voice not too loud
" When you be used to it, it can help you to control your mind to sleep better.
-->When you are used to it, ..
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